Reviews for Seconds or Years
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
the last line summed it all up beatifully, another happy poem that actually makes me happy and not wanna shoot myself 'cause of the cheesiness, nice work.
phantom66 chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
nicely done! auwsome! :-)
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Nicely written. I love how the last line closes the poem. Beautifully done, keep writing.
theatrical rhapsodies chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
M, I really like this. Stay or the moment or think about the tomorrow? Very good points brought up in this poem. I enjoyed it.

Good work.

love, theatrical rhapsodies
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
I really like this! it flows really well. Is it talking about living for the moment and not worrying about the future? That's how I interpretted the whole seconds or years part. But you probably don't care how I interpretted it. Anyways, I liked what I got out of the poem.