Reviews for One Word
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
konban wa

I guessed the ending - the word. It was a bit cliche, but I liked it anyway. Hey, who says there's anything wrong with cliche? I do cliche all the time, and I don't have a problem with it. Though a few select people do, I happen not to be one of them. *shrug*

Anyway, this was a lovely poem. Beautiful.

Completely and utterly unrelated: So our English teacher this year assigned us a memoir to write: a memory about a time when we told the truth or a lie. I had a lot of fun with mine, and I think it didn't come out TOO horribly. Do you think I should post it on fictionpress, or would that be a bit... odd?

Paalam

-Shan-
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
I like how you leave it open to interpretation, like someone will read and go 'yeah, you're right, when I'm in love I do this or that'. Makes it easy to relate to, and the core thought is interesting.