Reviews for Kage
La Tigra chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
You forgot the suru in the first line of the Romaji version of your poem.

Other than that. It's a nice poem, and it helps someone like me, a 3rd year Japanese student learn to read a bit more :D
JuniperRhose chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Beautiful. I only speak English, but I really appreciated getting to see the look of the words I know the meaning of.
Tragic Bliss chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
i enjoyed this poem. it was short and simple, yet eloquent at the same time. keep up the good work.
SAKoi chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
It's beautiful. 'paint upon water' is really nice. It's so cool that you can write in two languages!