Reviews for a silver necklace
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
I loved the mix of heartbreak and insanity in this, your metaphors were wonderful as well.
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Aww Crystal this is beautiful. You captured my feeling exavtly in those moments right after you can't cry anymore and then you see something your boyfriend (ex-boyfriend, but that sounds so sinister) gave you and then you can't help but feel it again. It's really good.
Sakka-Fenikkusu chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Very nice poem. It felt a bit awkward at some points (mostly the opening) but very good compared to the majority of poems I see here. I like the "Reflected at me through the silver / And refracted through my tears / Knees tucked in close / Face painted with red blush" part best. Why? Because it's a very visual experience. Keep this kind of imagery up throughout your poetry and you will be pleased with your results.