|Reviews for Don't Just Say It, Prove It|
| Brightheart chapter 21 . 2/24/2012
nice story. liked it.
| pandaS2 chapter 21 . 7/2/2009
i loved this story it was cute but i hate how dean didnt do anything wrong natasha always ruined everything and yet dean had to keep apologizing!
| pandaS2 chapter 20 . 7/2/2009
i really dont like Elle. lol but your an awesome writer!
| pandaS2 chapter 8 . 7/2/2009
ugh i really dont like Elle she pisses me off. but good story so far.
| christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
It's cute but very cliche. I'm totally adoring Elle though. :)
| Anonymous chapter 21 . 4/7/2009
Aw...that was a really sweet ending. Great resolution for a great story. Congrats.
| Marshie-kun chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I personally think this moved way too fast. A slow-paced story is better than a [too] fast-paced one. Always. Try describing before Elle moved, or add in a little somethings. It's missing A LOT of things.
You wrote: “Elle... why do you have to move?”, a 10 year old boy with brown hair and eyes as blue as the ocean itself, asked. / You repeatedly put unnecessary commas. When you end a sentence with a quotation, period, or exclaimation mark, you do NOT need a comma.
Btw, you made Elle and Dean sound as if they're 7. It hasn't been a decade since I was last 10 years old, and I KNOW that 10 year olds do not act like they 7 or 8.
This isn't a flame. I hope you can take this as constructive criticism. )
(Btw, try re-writing this story. A story should always look its best, so why not? If it's because of laziness, then deleting it would be better than showing off a horribly-written one.)
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| This.Ink chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
I guess i'll review even tough i'm so into it! LOVE IT! again.
| This.Ink chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
OMG! this is officially my favorite Fictionpress story. I LOVE IT! so awesome. Well right now i'm gonna go read the next chapter and it i'm not to into the story, maybe i'll review the next chapter -.
| righthere431 chapter 9 . 4/28/2008
yea yeah! they made upp woo! ]
| righthere431 chapter 8 . 4/28/2008
ah nothings going right / lol
| righthere431 chapter 7 . 4/28/2008
ah! stupid natasha and skyler!
| righthere431 chapter 6 . 4/28/2008
ugh stupid trenton