update!

i am loving the story!

its seriously awesome...as good as "Dark Angel"...maybe better...

but update!

wow. i can't wait for the next chapter. yeah, the flow is so much better here. but i think some parts has rather choppy dialogue.

I saw that this was on hiatus, but I think it has loads of potential- I started reading it because I only just finished 'Dark Angel', but this is so much better! I really enjoyed D.A (obviously!) but I think this shows just how much you have progressed as a writer and as a storyteller- it is so much more fluid and readable, and so much more intricate! I really hope you decide to take this one back up- I for one will be checking back up on it :)

Hey, this "chapter" just made my day. Seriously, that "flame that someone sent, it was so funny. Now, I'm not going to lie. This story is not really the greatest that I have read, but it better that some that I have see published, and with the benefit of some editing work, probably could be. Don't let yourself get a discouraged by flaming. I you enjoy writing and don't completely stink (which you don't) you should just keep practicing, and posting. If people are entertained by your story, all the freakin' merrier. Happy New Year!

lovin the story...it has me as enraptured as the first ) I really like the parallel story line of the painter that 'peeks in' to tease my curiosity!

KELLY'S HAVING A BABY! Poor Blean, mean ol' vampires. But Kelly's having a baby! No! TWO! WOOT WOOT! Can't wait for the next update!

Friggin

so I'm still confused... but I'm getting rather used to that... p.s. I love the bit about the babies! yay!

This was a great chapter! Aw she's having twins! That's so-o-o-o cute! Wonderful update, keep it up and add more soon!

Faith

When does he get to meet the girl? I love the mystery and intrigue but the romance was a real plus in the first one. ::))

This is getting very interesting! I love it so much!

Rissa

Okay I totally agree that he is disgusting... I mean that's not fair to those young writers I mean he could have crushed their dreams and I personally think he has a problem and needs a shrink anyway tell me have I can spread it and I'll be on it like skink on a warthog lol

I gather you've already inferred what a lying bastard this guy is, but everyone needs to have their opinion reinforced now and then. Clearly he just wants an opportunity to be a cruel, mean spirited jackass using large and made up words in an attempt at superiority. They weren't reviews, just preening opportunities. Notice how he never makes a direct reference to any specific thing you've written. If he was just an evil, overly critical flame/reviewer, he would point out a line, the way you wrote something, a character's personality, something. He never makes a mention of anything specific, leading me to believe its highly possibly he never read ANYTHING you wrote. I've been reading your work, and even though I should review more (;) I assume you have plenty of people doing that and know your worth as a writer. And you are a writer, a very good one. I can't say that to just anyone. You use correct grammar and spelling (we all occasionally make mistakes, admittedly, but you hardly ever do and clearly have a firm grasp over everything literary) and you write INTERESTINGLY. I hope you fume over these messages, share them with your friends in the non-cyber world, laugh about them, eat some ice cream and express contempt for this despicable person who seems to believe they're all that. (Seriously, what's with all the fake words? And all the hyphens? And the large superfluously(here's a prime example) used words?) Most of all, I pray he has posted fan fiction. So he may enter a lower circle of hell. *evil smile* Please keep writing! I'll show him what for in the name of your honor!

Can I kill him if I dont get blood on the floor? He is absolutly horrible!

Hey! I completley agree with you. This guy obviously thinks he is better than those who actually have the guts to put up their work and recieve constructive critism, despite the fact that he hasn't put up any of his own work, that is if he even has any...

Stupid moron.

btw it was- w .fanfiction u/ 1223755/ Flame_Rising :)

no... you're not the only one! I wonder if enough of us flame him, he'll go away...? that'd be fantastic! haha! seriously though, I cant believe that some people think that this is "clever, witty, or HELPFUL"! if i got a review like that, I'd probably break down crying! granted, I'm a big baby, but still! I'm with ya, sista!