|Reviews for Satan Saint|
| Salkiethia chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
A bit of a forced flow nearer to the end, but nonetheless, this is a really nice poem. Fave line: "A staring contest that lasts all year."
You've got a nice, almost feather light touch when it comes to writing poetry. You can continue to expand on that with just a little extra work. Happy writing!
| Jecori chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
caught a few errors: tempra - tempera, and i think u mean 'the freshest ink' but that's it. this is nicely written with a good point of view. good vocab use, too )