|Reviews for Let Us All|
| In State of Agony chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
ok ok ok...or you have a tons of talent or i just pick your best poems...jum...i dont want to put your 238 poems at my favarites so, from now on i'm picky...lol
very good job i can relate
This world is ((In State of Agony))
| DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I love how you repeated the first line again at the end.
| M. Edmondson chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
This piece is very well written though I think this line should be changed to this, The pretty one that shines and gleams, typo probably. Any way this poem was powerful and awing. I actual like this piece and it's going to go on my favorites list. My favorite verse would have to be Let's all pretend affection... that verse was moving and sweet.
| Nicola Heartache chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Pretty and melodic. The fourth stanza really touched a nerve.
| winteria chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Nice. I like the broken concept.
| Arafax chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
I have read through several pieces of your posted work and found them all very good. You have a way with words. Keep up the good work.
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
To kiss bleeding lips only hurts, so you only be adding to their pain.
| Heroh chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
I am in love with this poem right now! It's Amazing, in my opinion at least. I am so adding this to my favs (in fact, why don't I just add you, since I love all of your poems?) lol