Reviews for Sometimes Maybe
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I like this line: "I’m made of electricity and mistakes tonight"
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Wow this is amazing, the imagery is absouloutely beautiful, really takes your breath away.

"While I paint my nails glow in the dark

Just so you might see me when I’m six feet gone

Dead but maybe so much more alive than anyone

With glass bones and diamond fingertips" Just brilliant.
SirScott chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Black wedding dresses would be more honest in most cases.

SirScott
J.Dietz chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
I love your poem. Dark and symbolic. It would be cool to wear a black wedding dress, too.