|Reviews for Justice Slayer|
| Nikki Nix chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Hi, I've been reading Justice Slayer since you first posted it but i just joined FP today after thinking about joining for a long time to post some of my stories and I'm sad to see you've taken Justice Slayer down, but I would love to carry on reading it.
| starry eyez chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
I am really sorry you've taken both stories down, I often re read them when I'm feeling down to cheer myself up, I understand your reasoning and don't blame you. Hell if I wrote like that id want to protect my stories too, whoever came up with "imitation is the sincerest form of flattery" is an idiot its totally untrue, its just aggravating. Anyways keep up the writing and I hope to see it in print some day ;)
| Charlee Rayne chapter 19 . 12/16/2011
So much suspense! UPDATE SOON!
| smurf-love chapter 19 . 9/2/2011
this story is great, alil differant and confusing every once in a while but other than that i love it, keep working and ill keep reading
| Bookworm chapter 19 . 7/17/2011
Ok so love this story! I think I started reading it three years ago in 2008-2009? oh well. Is there going to be an epilouge? Are you going to post the story that was up for a time about Shateal? I kind of liked the no happy ending, however much my inner romantic cried out for a happy one and thus the cynic in me forced it back down. I do have to say thank god they finally had sex I mean after all the sexual tension and fights they had to do the deed. The leaving scene feels slightly abrubt. I mean I know you mention when she would leave but maybe to transition it better say like it had been some number of days since that night or the next morning I arrived at the train station with Shateal... only more eloquently put instead of my waffle and sugar induced haze, and no this is not being done in the morning that just so happend to be my dinner after a day of online class exams.
| bleh chapter 19 . 7/16/2011
sooo...you feel like updating anytime soon?
this story's amazing
| Fragile Daydreamer chapter 19 . 7/12/2011
Hey there! You're right. If you ended it here, you'd have found an angry mob outside your house complete with torches and pitchforks. It would just seem abrupt if you ended it like that. Having said that...
About the love scene. it was absolutely fitting, given Justice's apprehensions about intimate relations and Nicholas' reverting to primal urges before regaining some semblance of sensitivity. Let me just say, however, that I did not expect you to write about Justice grabbing "something soft, rounded, and just as hot if not hotter than the rest of him... " Not that I have anything against that, just took me by surprise, that's all... hehehe
Now about, Justice's departure: It was suitably sentimental without being mushy. Something that I have to commend you for. But like I said, the whole section gave me a boatload of that "WTH?" feeling.
here's to hoping the next chapter would have some sort of explanation or would somehow tie-up loose ends.
| sw33tdaisie chapter 19 . 7/5/2011
...I love Shatael therefore I want to see more interaction with him since his story is on hold for the moment...but I want to say haha to Nicholas because I'm pretty sure that's like the only time a woman has walked out on him - oh the irony *wicked grin*...but it did seem like something Justice would do...I kinda feel a time jump, even if its a few months, needs to happen now that shes left. Justice needs to be able to live on her own and support herself/be confident with herself or she can never be truly happy with Nicholas...at least that's what it feels like to me...therefore more Shatael interaction to boost her confidence...and her with her dad too...but if you don't do that, its fine too. This is a great story but it was Ice King that got me hooked and truly I just can't wait til you start with that one again...but I understand that you can't leave this story until its good enough for you so no complaining (and sorry if it seems like I am right now...don't mean to be)...either way update soon...I love all your stories...they are sooo addicting!
| Alicat05812 chapter 19 . 6/21/2011
Love the story. Hurry up and write more please.
| completeandtotalrandomness chapter 19 . 6/16/2011
The fact that Justice left surprised me but it was very her to do so. I'm having fun reading this and I can't wait to see Nico's reaction to her departure. .~
| musicalfishieXD chapter 19 . 5/4/2011
So I'm sorry about the spelling cow. I should have realized. I know a lot of dyslexics. I like this one. Its very interesting. WhereDoes she get her powers from? And why is she kind of in love with Nicholas if the tear was another sindians? And as for my comment about your other story, what I meant was that the language wasn't the same, not just the way they talked.
And you said something about an unreliable beta. I'm curious about that. I want to be a beta but you have to have so many stories posted, and I just doing know if I want to post my stories. I really like the way you write, and your stories are really good too.
| Sadie chapter 19 . 4/25/2011
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant chapter! Dying for the next one!
| violet-eyez chapter 19 . 4/25/2011
it seems so open ended, I mean she just leaves after sleeping with him...she seemed so hurt when he said that he was using her to elevate his boredom...can't wait for the next chapter and is shateal's story going to be updated?
| MiseryLovedHer chapter 19 . 4/25/2011
I miss this story! Well ok, i wished i could have had nich's pov .. Sounds like he wasnt rly in his himan state during the love scene or smth? I did wish that the love scene was longer.. After all what he did to Justice was pretty mean. And an explanation as to why the room was dark would be great too! That said, i think the leaving scene seems like an exciting turning point... Cant wait for the next update x
| Jessie Wulf chapter 15 . 3/7/2011
Ooh, I really like this story so far. Very interesting, indeed. I've noticed some of your previous chapters need editing, such as words being spelt as "to" instead of "too", etc. etc.