Reviews for Lila |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Very interesting...still naught else to say though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing, should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You suck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work love i'm excited she is getting away from master as well i cant wait to see what |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really exciting stuff keep it up your awesome i'm very proud of you too. i love you -Derek |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow best chapter so far i love you so |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, so I know this chapter is pretty confusing, but its also important. I've got to edit it, but basically it's a young man going to visit an older man in his home. If you want to know the exact identity of the young man, which is a total spoiler, go back to the chapter "The Oracle" and read it closely. Again, this is pretty important, so make sure to read close! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sorry to say that, all though it was good, this chapter was not up to your usual standards, I hope that you will go over it and bring it up to par. Still enjoy your story though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue! Continue! Continue! PLEASE continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story's still going strong, can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, little short, im a bit disapointed, but theirs always the next 17 chapters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() its just the way i thought the story would go the direction its going is very promising keep up the good work and please dnt stop writing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so fun to read :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter its been awhile fool :) you need too write lots lots ok |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really progressing, keep it up. |