I always have that problem...with being happy with a chapter, but you had nothing to be worried about with this one, I thought it was just great, all of the chapters have been...your character seems cool, not flat at all, and I could get to like her...even though you havent updated in an age

His best friend/first love...nice. But Catalina...interesting development. Just wondering, did Lisa and Adrian ever sleep together?

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I really like this story so far. Please update soon!

Hehehe.

Why were you saying that it's bad? Psh. Not true.

This was cool to read. I like your character. She's probably not someone I would like in real life but you made her likeable anyway. And in a really short piece of writing, too.

See, you're accomplished. :)

I like your writing, your diction. You know when you read something and you forget it's the author who's written it because the writing is so good? Well, that happened to me for a good chunk of this.

Keep writing :) I'm interested.

YAY! *claps like a little kid after seeing a real cool card trick from older sibling (Sanity is overrated)* I like how you show how he's changed but she still knows him and how he acts, but she's still a little unsure. I LOVE your writing style. Now if you could update this fast again...

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OH! Him? Sounds like he still attracts her like he did the first time (?) around. Of course I could be (probably am) assuming way too much.

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