I'm loving the revamp and how fast you're updating :D

Christopher and Lyn MUST get together! And Chris MUST save Lyn from Sean at the formal. But on another note.. there's this goth-like chick in one of my classes, doesn't say much and just stares with these dead eyes.. and I kid you not, every single time my eyes land on her, I think "Sandra" Haha, it's so great. It makes me want to go up and talk to her and befriend her. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!

ANOTHER! I'm not sure what to say but...scarlet...i feel like I'm getting her name wrong sorry..she needs to come back! I feel like something interesting will happen at this fiestaa. Update soon!

I have one dimple too! Well, actually, I have three. But that's just as weird. Maybe a bit weirder. haha.

Ahh! Updates! 2. Overly ecstatic. Poor Lillian...Lucy and people just wouldn't leave her alone. I'm glad we found out what the whole mystery crime was...it was killing me. Something crazy and reckless always seems to be happening..and so i can only wonder just what isgoing to happen next. Update soon!

something that i just happen to notice. usually jewish people do not name their children christoper (or kristen, christian(obviously) etc) because of the Christ-opher.

This shit has had to be the most hilarious story I've read in a while. Her personality is just..she's so serious. The things she says are hilarious. Her letters are great. Chapter 6 when i first read it...it was the funniest thing I'd heard in a while. Most likely because it was just so unexpected. Your brain is one to be cherished. Maybe some of your other readers are upset with this because apparently you revised it so many times but this is a really great version and a story doesn't matter unless the author is completely happy with it so...I'm glad you did it rather than leaving it like most do and not caring. I would have commented for each chapter and filled your inbox but i wanted to keep reading and I'm sure you've got enough reviews. But uh...i love all the characters and all of the editions. Chris is still mysterious evcen though most of him has been revealed. Can we expect a comeback from Lucy? I've got nothing more to ask of you except to please update soon because I can't wait till next chapter. I'm glad this isn't cliché also, like soo many other stories, but I'm rambling so..till next chapter

Lyn is amusing. Christopher is just...a bit scary. Hmm...never seen "Topher" from Christopher yet. Loved it though. The letters to her imagination are SO FUNNY XD

this is an amazing story, please update soon! i literally check everyday to see if you have updated. i really like lyn's character.

I love this story so much! I just started reading it, and wow.. amazing.. amazing.. words can't describe. Update soon!

After a long, frustrating day of work, your update was damn near the best part of the day.

What I love is how creative this story is. All of your characters-even Carol, who comes off as one of those thought-it-must-speak-it people-have this depth to them that makes them more realistic.

And even though I've read it before and know pretty much what happens, I'm looking forward to more.

Cheers.

Aw. Poor Lillian.

Good stuff. Waiting for more :)

I need more.

But to put it politely: please update soon :P

Cheers.

Jesus Christ. I'd forgotten how much I love this story until now :)

I like how Lilian is naive, and not in the typical, irritating way, but in a quirky, lovable, perfect sort of way.

And something about Christopher makes me turn into a 13-yr-old fangirl. I'm not sure exactly why, but I should probably be ashamed of myself :P But anyway, I like how he's actually realistic as as seventeen-year-old; not many stories address the unfortunate truth: all boys rearrange themselves, regardless of what society-or anyone who happens to be witness to the crotch-grabbing-has to say on the matter.

Cheers.

Awesome. As this is one of my favourite stories on the entire site, I will (try to) read and review every edited chapter.

Can't wait to read the revised version :)