I love this story... it's strangely hilarious.

ciao.

aw. i really enjoy reading this story!

Short butgood. Curfew? 10:30? Dude, that is like early, but whatever. ood story and characters.

NS

Cool. Good story. I've been reading it for the past three hours, so that should tell you something.

aww how sweet. lol

yay fluff chapters! i like how sandra and lyn bond. :)

she and christopher have an interesting relationship, and it makes it interesting. i'd ask for an update soon, but you'd probably need a second set of fingers to type faster- your quick updates are awesome

I absolutely love this story. I really wish I had half the talent you do. Please continue this story!

Oh! I thinky Lyn likes Chris. Sandra sounds cool, in a never-talk-I-am-dead sorta way. Keep up the good work.

NS

"Yeah, no shit, he can see my fucking boobs."

quite possibly the best line ever.

Now you've really got me hooked.

what a weird mother

anyway, where the hell are they going? it was sort of funny how outright he admitted that she'd be breaking curfew. and he went into the dreaded carnival to get her! that's cute.

i really should not write reviews at midnight

not that they're probably any better at any other time of the day

but this was good! please update soon

to be completely honest, i wasn't sure how i felt about this after reading the first few chapters.

but for some reason i couldn't stop reading, and now i find myself wanting more.

it's intriguing - it kept a silly smirk on my face.

so bravo.

write more soon, okay?

please and thank you.

Sweet keep it up dude.

NS

haha, fantastic. oh the world of teenage hormones. i like lyn's outlook on boys. it's good to be rational sometimes. :)

Wow. I looked up on the internet what a nymphomaniac was and was sligtly disturbed. Why would someomne tell a lie like that? Good story though, and I like Christopher. He seems...uh...cool. Is she a pathalogical liar?

NS