Hey hey hey!

So this is absolutely my FAVORITE story. Ever. It's hilarious and totally original. Your sense of humor rocks and I plan on reading your other stories (if you have any, of course). I also think that your grammar is really good and that scores a lot of points, too.

It's simply fabulous.

Leo22

this story is great, adorable and sort of different. enjoyed it very much (:

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so wonderfully, excellently well-written, an abundance of glee is literally emanating from me :D

This story makes me so fucking happy :DD

And also, this story is one of the stories I will be reading again, and again (:

wow this was amazing. probably my favorite fictionpress story of all time. it had unique, interesting, well-rounded characters, cute, sweet humor, and strange, awkward brushes will real life - real-life quirkiness and real-life mortification. Lyn and Christopher were both adorable and dynamic and pleasantly contradictory. your writing has its own style and flow, which i love and which really helps set the mood for the story. i enjoy the straightforward prose and the exploratory word usage. i love it all.

GREAT STORY!

-zozo

ps: i grinned like a lovesick sap.

"'What do you guys do around here?' he asks me deftly."

I think deft is used out of context. Deft means to dexterous or nimble or perhaps clever, and I'm not sure how that fits in at all.

Anyways, I really like this story so far! The writing style is very good, and really gives a sense of Lyn's character. Plus it DOES NOT SEEM CLICHE! Haha I'm excited!

This story was awesome, funny, and strange but in a good way xD

XD

This has got to be one of the best bad boy/good girl stories I have ever read. I swear. It was so damn brilliant and extremely funny. One of my favorites. _

If I were a guy, I'd want to be Christopher.

And being a girl, I'd want to be Lillian.

-Liz :D

omg...Cracked up at her last note. :D :D :D This story was awesome. Thanks so much man!

Um, I don't mean to be rude by just leaving this note without a real review, but I'll try to review later, once I've finished the chapter. I noticed a pretty glaring error. You wrote 'Bacardi is everywhere, and I find a large bottle of rum, half empty.' but Bacardi is a brand of rum. Do you mean Bacardi mixed drinks, Bacardi Breezers, or something else? That line confused me, and I just wanted to point it out.

I love her. She is so weird!

I just want to marry her and whatnot. Like yippy skippy.

Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo and your story has been added to the Humor portion of the site. Congrats. :) Here's your raving review:

If you liked Vandrophobia, you'll most likely like this story too. It was incredibly cute with the romance twist to the bad boy and good girl. There's also some drama involved in Dear Imagination, with the main character's anthropophobia overshadowing some of her life.

XOXO,

Juliet

this was a whacked up story. but i kind of liked it

I love this story! You're such an amazing writer .

I agree with Jade. This was really good but the ending, the way it ended, ruined it so much. I'm actually a bit frustrated with it

Wow. My friend told me to read this story an I have been for the past 3 days. WHY DO YOU HAVE TO END?