I loved it! But Jayson is pissing me off with that other girl's number (though he's kinda right).

You just have to update again soon. I want the fluff!

Very intense. I was afraid something was going to happen with Jack for a second. You scared me.

So glad you recovered your chapter from email-triangle (can't remeber what you called it...my memory sucks).

Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Love it. You've got me hanging here...hope you update soon.

I hope you're gonna put them back together.

I'm an idiot! Sorry for not reviewing sooner and sorry to hear you were in a car accident! Hope you're feeling better. Great chapter...lots of things going on. I love it. Keep it up girlie and once again, hope you weren't injured too seriously.

I liked it. it's good to slow down and not concentrate on the relationships and concentrate more on her riding. i can relate to jack's character. i have a few guy friends in my life who are like that. lol. keep up the good work!

Sorry about your wreck, I hope you're all okay. I know you're trying to get her to Cali, but some of the dialogue in this seems a bit...forced. There might not be anything going on between Jack and Rylan, but would Jayson be jealous? Because he's totally gonna go visit her, right?

UPDATE SOON!

OH THE DRAMA! lol Gah that was low of Jayson at the end. *shakes head* haha but yeah awsome chapter! Update soon!

OMG NO WAY! Yeah, I understand how you have to have drama but WOW! Great chapter! I think your story is going fine so don't worry. I'll be anxiously awaiting an update.

AW! That was so sweet! And I'm glad Sara and Matt are finally going out! Great chapter.

Wow, that was...HUGE! I loved the chapter and would love it if you would update ASAP!

WHAT! NO! She looses her virginity to him and then the next day the break up! That's SO bull shit! GAA! please post soon! I need to know what's going to happen!

Dang, and here I though Jayson was cool. But that was low...you can't keep my attention if you're not here. But I like that Rylan accepted instead of giving it up for Jayson; she deserves it and if Jayson can't take that, he's not worth it.

UPDATE SOON!

OMG OMG OMG! YAY! Finally, some action. lol. j/k. He is so sweet. and I love how he just knows without a doubt that he is going to marry her, not that he wants to or that he might, but that HE IS GOING TO! lol. keep it up!

Aw! I LOVE Jayson and Rylan! They're SO cute! The entire birthday scene was ADORABLE!

UPDATE SOON!

Awesome! I sense the drama coming! I hope it's here by tomorrow (hint!hint!). Seriously, I really like the story. Keep up the good work (do I sound like a teacher?)