Reviews for Bleeding Heart
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Wow...I like how you played it out. Saying she would rather have a painful heart than have none at all. But the last line, "frenzied belittling" sounded a bit out of place. It kinda made it get off subject, I feel. But otherwise, beautiful as always.

-Ramen
vaudeville summers chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Wonderful! I could feel the emotion!

~deanna
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
the second stanza is what makes the poem and breaks a little piece of you.
Elenute chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
I love this. I love how its so true. I do not like the fact that the word "day" is used twice in two lines in slightly clich├ęd lines. Or than that, I think its fantastic.