Reviews for Free Jukebox
kit feral chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
this is probably my favorite by you.

it's just snap snap snap... and then at the end it just CLICKS, y'know?

"He says they were for the jukebox, 'til he realized it was free."

that seems to have a lot more meaning that it probably does. whatever, it means a lot to me.



Loopdeloop chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
excellent. the words lend themselves superbly to the story, and i fucking love your descriptions. a lot of allen ginsberg's "eyeball kicks".
spiked punch after midnight chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
Excellent. I like it.
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
oh she'll be walking home alone

with a paper bag filled with who-knows-what,

and her glassy, breaking bones.- it's that, sandwiched in-between the not-quite lighthearted rest of this, that really gets the reader. bravo.
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
wow, i really loved this. great work.
Dawn Gabriel chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Great. A little teasing, a little quaint. I liked it.