Reviews for winker the moon
Neon Chandelier chapter 17 . 1/26/2009
you are brilliant/inspiring/ect.
Writer of Eternal Stories chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Wow, really powerful, especially the end. Good job :)
Loopdeloop chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
quite good. there was an obvious mood to the piece and that's what attracted me.
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
The last lines of this are perfect. I especially liked the first four lines, too.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
wow, powerful poem. Sad. I liked it.

Girl On A Strawberry Swing chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Nice. I really love the last four lines. The second one seems like it could use better wording, but it still works.
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
ohjesus. perfect ending lines. just perfect. this is fantastic, it really, really is. I love the almost playful way it starts, the way it draws you in, like a secret being whispered into your hair that your straining to hear.
Cracked Mirror Image chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
great job...its kinda morbid...sorta...but its great over all

AlwaysSummerDays chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
Beautiful.. i liked it, i keeps you guessing about what's happening to the character...

keep up the good work!