Reviews for Sniper Cinderella
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Interesting take, makes me giggle.
moon01234 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Awesome story. Fantastic job.
Our Lady Silence chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Wink wink chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I love your story. It's an unusual twist to the whole Cinderella plot and yet they still are quite similar. I like your sense of humor; it isn't dry as it is very much entertaining and hilarious. I laughed so hard, really. :)) Hope to read more stories from you.


[I wanted to PM you but then I'm not a member here so, yeah.]

Do you have only one account? Because there's another story here in FP which has the same title as yours. AND ... well it's better if you see it for yourself, yeah? Let's just say, 'changes' have been done.


Maybe I got it wrong, so I'm leaving it all to you.

All my best,

Bonafide Bengali chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I love the way you've written this. Sarcasm makes my day. Amazing job :D.
kazoua chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Okay, okay. The first thought in my head when I saw the review button was "WHAT THE FUCK" but then, what fun is that?

No fun. None at all.

So. In exchange of that asinine comment, I think I'll say "GENIUS!" OR, hint hint, scream it at the top of my lungs. Because seriously, this isn't my usual thing but I've never seen something so outrageous dangerous but nonsexual yet strangely drawing and mesmerizing.

So yes. That is my review. Power to you.

Also, before I forget, thank you for putting Jakey Wakey Lakey on your story alert. It makes me happy.
Mealine chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Very good story.

So funny.

Excuse the short review and sentence fragments, I figured I should review because I did like it, but I don't have any criticism, so...


djanae chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
That made me laugh so hard. That was a good twist on the orginal story, and I especially loved the ending line
Brackynn chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Firstly, thank you so much for reviewing my story! :)

Secondly - what a great twist on dear old Cindy's story. (And realism is seriously overrated, in my humble opinion ;) ) I loved Cinderella's snarkiness, really enhanced the morbid humour - in short, thoroughly enjoyable, with the last line being rather perversely satisfying ;) I did notice at some times the tense changes - I think you meant for it all to be in past tense, but it does lapse into present - "They're here tonight, and I'm glad it's a masked ball..." - and future - "This will be my masterpiece." I just got a little confused as to whether Cinderella is supposed to be thinking these parts, or whether they are just part of the narration; in the case of the former, perhaps putting thoughts in italics would help clarify?

But aside from that extremely trivial nitpick - loved this story. So creative, so unexpected, so wonderful :)
nightflora chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Highly amusing.

Although instead of killing him on the wedding night she should keep him alive and torture him for *years*. That would be even more satisfying.
innominate noun chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Ah, the chasm where realism used to be is what makes the story beautiful. I really adore this.

Thank you for writing!
Gimstan chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Very funny, i really liked it! :)
storykeeper chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
That's awesome! Go Cinderella! Airily, you have a great sense of (morbid) humor.
BlueEmerald4 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Wow, this was pretty interesting, never thought that Cinderella would be the type to try and kill Prince Charming. Lol. But this was a good tale that you could definitely spin out into a longer story if you want. I hope you take a look at some of my stuff, it's not really much good (the completed one) but hey, I like knowing what others think about it.

Teffie chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Ha! This was hilarious. Short and sweet. :D

At one point you forgot a space between "know" and "this", but that was the only mistake I found. Very nice.
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