|Reviews for Smoke|
| MorvanaDuMiruvor chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
Another example of the stupidity that is the usual reader: This has two readers, God only knows how many hits, and it's probably the most brilliant story I've ever read on here.
I came away from it feeling almost high myself. Like the fragmented thoughts, the apathy, and the total...iuno, everything. Maybe I'm putting too much into it, maybe it's just a stylistic piece to you. But I love it. I think it's brilliant.
| Just Max chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
This was great - you have a really distinct writing style.
I like that it was choppy and fragmented with a touch of randomness. But it all flowed together.
Anyway, I'm going to scuttle off and read some of your other stuff now.
| jigsaw chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
'little guys living on the trees in your lungs'
that bit is excellent. i really like the style of this, the guy just sounds so stoned, but you manage to do that without just making it too scatty and difficult. . . . very well done!