|Reviews for the sky is falling again|
| ACCOUNT P.E.R.I.S.H.E.D chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
this poem is a confusion of beauty and violence...
"I want to suck bullets from between your teeth" - has a threat to it like a charge... everything is electric
"(the pieces look like rainbow fireflies
and slam into the ground like beer bottles, shattering and ricocheting off our legs)" - the brackets work, like an after-thought... it sparks, again.
I really like your writing; 'the spin' is also beautifully meloncholic. lovely stuff!
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Wow, again. I like the way you repeat the idea of violence and a world ending type theme. 'the sky falls down' 'armageddon. An amazing and powerfull poem.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
i like the poem.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
I like the way the first line is continued with the second-to-last.
And I love the last line, it's a perfect summary of the feelings in this poem.
| S Noelle Long chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
these are all the things i would like to say but i get cottonmouth when i think of them. this is perfect.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
wow, great poem. The imagery and words used are awesome and make the poem so. . . wow lol. I especially love the last line, just because it ties it all together very nicely. Keep it up!
| Wylloa chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
all of your work is so intense.
the way you write brings your readers in,
hook, line, and sinker.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
"i want to suck bullets from between your teeth", paired with the not-quite-ending, "i bite down on the bullets between your teeth, they spark", is orgasm-worthy all on its own. my other favorite line being, "my jeans are too thick." god, i'm glad you're writing again.