I want more! This guy screams of everything she's has ever wanted, so why not more pleasant surprises?!

I like the story! Cute :)

Rather cute and original. I like the quirkiness of all of your characters.

yay i like it

Ha. Cute. Creighton and Salem. I love it.

That was bizarre, but good all the same. The ending just about killed me, but hey, change that doesn't kill us makes us stronger, right?

I liked it,

E.

you're a talented writer, I like the way you word things.

I want Creighton's babies.

[Loved it!]

WTF MAHN? I AVE SEEN DIS BFORE! HOW DAR U COPEE SUMBODEE ELSES WAHK! IT EES CALLED PLAGEEISM, U NO!

Um. Yeah. Like your new-look profile. You're officially one of the cool kids now. Woo. Sup with all the hyper-linked Xs? That's my thing mahn. That really IS plagerism. Although technically, I probably unknowingly stole it off somebody else. And nothing is REALLY original any more, because there's no ideas left in the world. If only we'd been born two hundred years ago and weren't in danger of dying because of all the additional carbon in the air. Life could be so different.

I had a needle today. I gave all those whiners a piece of my mind. Pft. How faints when they get a needle? I'm all, "Here's my arm, lady with the hopefully-clean stick!" Not really. But they're supposed to talk to you to try and calm you down or whatever, but they jab the needle in and THEN start talking. Tsk. Hmm... who REALLY makes that sound, anyway? Tsk. Tsk.

Ah... I have to go to a Japanese meeting information thingymajig at school now, so I'll be back later... much later. Muahahaha.

This story made me smile! I could really relate to her because it's ridiculously true how repitious high school is and it seems like so few people realize it and then even less really want out. I enjoyed this and Nevin is an ass.

It feels a little incomplete to me, but really sweet all the same. Great job!

i like it...kinda different then what i've been reading lately so...its a nice change...i like it...nice job...

gRaCe

ohh, i like this very, very much! keep writing!