I do find this plot very interesting. I wish that you would update. I am so curious to why she is the way she is. I really want to know what happen to Emily and how it deals with her. Why did she break up with Michael? Why is Michael someone she cannot tolerate? Oliver sounds like an interesting person, I do hope that you continue this. I want to know what is going on. I am glad that David tries to help her out. I also don't know what the deal is with Arthur, but he sounds interesting. When is Oliver going to fall for her? There are so many questions left unanswered, if you have time, please update. I just really really enjoy this story. It is very different.

Why is it that there is another reverse psycology that has the same summery and chapters as this one? I don't know who you are or whether the copie or the copier, but this is seriously messed up.

You have to continue!

I'm dying to know what happens in the end!

This story is so good, and I love DAvid :)

And the lollipop person ;)

millie xx

I read the whole 9 chapters and I loved it. You got everything in about how her life was at the begining and how it is slowly changing which is fabulous. Now you just need more of Oliver in the picture.

I thought at 1st the lolli pop was from Oliver but how would he have known to give it to David? Maybe its from Michael.

I cant wait to read more!

nice

I bet Oliver sent the lolipop. :P They are fun and sweet and juicy. Also, almost getting caught with the physics books was fun. XD

Heya!

Anopther really good chapter! i loved teh lolipop thing!

Cant wait for more!

Wow, short.

Good chapter, but still awful short. Well, it is okay if you do not make us wait to much longer till the next one! I loved the Oliver-ness to this chapter, and hope for more in the future…? Also, I can not wait to unravel the mystery of Emily.

I saw you posed a new story! The Red Lights one you mentioned in the chapter….But I haven’t had time to read it, yet. Don’t worry; I’ll get around to it soon!

Wabibito

Hey,

I really like your writing style and the plot line of this story, but I feel like nothing happens in the chapters. The story doesn't feel like it is moving forward. It's not really an issue of length as it is an issue of pace. I always read (even if I don't always have something to say), so feel free to email me questions/concerns or whatnot. I look forward to seeing where this goes!

I just start this story and I'm liking it so far. I think Oliver might have a long way to go before he gets anything out of Skye. Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait till the next one! :)

Wow~I sure managed to take forever to read and review this chapter...

Well, it was good, thats for sure.

It is also for sure that you didn't get it out faster XP but it was a good chapter! Short, but you know me...never happy unless you magically write a 250 page chapter in a day. That would be super nice.

The less than wonderful characters like Eleanor are usually the most fun to write!

Yay! Oliver again! And it seems to be pointing to more Oliver within the next chapter...YAYAY!

Wabibito

P.S. you better keep that promise about chapter 9 showing up soon!

I definitely don't hate this! actually, it's more like love :) lots of love. please update soon i really want to see more of oliver and find out more about what happened to emily

thanks for the update! please continue

Arthur is an odd character. I get the feeling David doesn't like him very much. And doesn't Oliver realize how unprofessional it would be to drive Skye home? Skye certainly does. I'm looking forward to seeing how the drive goes anyway. I think it would be interesting to see how David and Oliver act around each other. I mean they are both technically working towards the same goal, right?

another really engaging chapter! you write very well, lighthearted, almost, but very readable, and you keep the attention of the reader very well. great job!