Reviews for Battlefield
bittersweet.season chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
i dont like happy poetry. i mean, like it so upbeat and lacking emotion and silly, i just never really get into it. saying that, i have to say that i loved this, really.

because its raw with real emotion, and its vulnerable, and its special. its slightly broken but repairable feeling, and its strong.

feelings of love and strength and devotion and happiness are flowing freely thorught this. its pretty great.
Salkiethia chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
I think you spelled the title wrong. Unless, of course, you ment to put 'Battfield'. The only thing I would mention is the fact that you put commas at the end of nearly every line. You really don't have to because of the way poetry is read - a presumed pause at the end of each line. Anyway, it's really good. I like the very beginning three lines the best.
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
very well-worded. I likes. wish I could give some better input, but i'm not really sure how it could be improved to be of greater good than it already is, really.