Reviews for Forgotten Child
InkyPink chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Chilling end to a scary poem. I wasn't expecting that as the consequence...
Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
With this poem, first off, it's a good poem. It's true to the letter and it flows together nicely. One recommendation I have for you, though, is that you use punctuation. Add commas, periods, etc. It helps with the reading and informs the reader how each line should be read, making the poem that much more enjoyable (if I can use enjoyable in the context of this poem...).
Alice Faraday chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Good one. I loved the climax/ending. I know exactly what emotions to feel as I read this poem, I think a lot of people would relate to it. Strong.

MOUSE
socks-lost chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
That is so unbelievably true its horible then they wonder why he brings his gun so stupid
Greenfire42 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
That's what it's like.
Chihero chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
The concept of this is nice, it reminds me of this book I read where this girl got bullied and had to transfer schools. I think if you changed a couple words, it would flow a lot better, too. The ending really makes you (well, probably only me) think about Virginia Tech. :(