I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or

That was funny about his belt ;P

I really like this and I can't believe there are only two reviews!

That was pretty funny, and I liked the checklist bit at the end, as well as all the puns. They may be the lowest form of life when it comes to humour, but they stil get grins and chuckles. The only things I can think of is some description of how the two folks in the bar act, and more puns and such. Other than that, this was a good little story.

:-) great humor. I really like this, let me know when you update it