Reviews for Sixes and Eights Amateur Sweethearts chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
loved it! how eveyrhting was described i was hanging on veyr word...and the meaning of it was deep until the very end when finally it seemed to leap out...nice job

- Changed
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
I loved the line 'kicking her Converse to sprays and showers'

becuase it was so obviously about the beach. In so few words...what an image.

the rest was all right.