these are all just gorgeous.

gorgeous imagery. x

Oh, what a wonderfully sad poem. At least the end. I really loved the lines "It's called beautiful-/But you can't put a label on objective/So she says she's not beautiful/And really, she isn't." Quite nice. Wonderful job.

thanks for the review- the only really decent one i've gotten in ages. i really liked this, [and the white dress], i liked the truthfulness and how it became so wonderfully unpoetic when its frank. she really isn't beautiful, not the goddess of old times, and the 112 words-i didnt count, it told me-seemed like a story. and someone who can tell a good story that means something in 112 words... thats so not fair.

a smile goes unnoticed x