|Reviews for Torn Family Portrait|
| Lime-sama the Second chapter 43 . 12/27/2014
I am sad that this story hasn't updated. I'd love to see it update again, especially since it was one of my favorites that you guys wrote together. I want to know what happens between Kusarigane and Araki.
| Lime-sama the Second chapter 42 . 12/27/2014
That fight kept me at the edge of my seat! I hope Araki doesn't kill him. I don't want Daichi to die.
| Lime-sama the Second chapter 41 . 12/27/2014
Man, I saw this coming after the whole picture thing. Nothing like a big, gay fight between the guys to stir up the tension. I wonder who will lose out of this one.
| Lime-sama the Second chapter 40 . 12/27/2014
I love this chapter of this story. I want to go back to the time when you guys updated frequently. This was a cute chapter, especially because I love Bonyx.
| Lime-sama the Second chapter 39 . 12/27/2014
I can't believe I didn't finish reading TFP? What the hell is wrong with me? Iam going to finish reading your updates, and hope the both of you didn't give up on it.
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 43 . 12/22/2014
I'm glad Daichi is okay, but still. Kusa has every right to be mad at Araki, because Araki was being a douche-hoe. Please update again! I really want to see more of this.
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 42 . 12/22/2014
Man, I'm really on edge here! Please let Daichi be alright. I really love his character and if Araki kills him I will never forgive him!
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 41 . 12/22/2014
Oh man, things really blew up between all of them, didn't it? Sheesh, I hope Daichi will be alright. It's nice to see another side of his character, tho.
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 40 . 12/22/2014
I frickin LOVE Baki and Onyx. I really do hope that the two of them hook up in TFP.
| Tragedy of Light and Dark II chapter 39 . 12/22/2014
Fife and Daichi are cute together...even though I know about their age difference...;; Uh...yeah XD
| Lime-sama the Second chapter 38 . 12/22/2014
Awesome chapter! I really like the emotional turmoil between Baki and Koji, and it was funny when Taigumo was kicked in the balls.
| H.E.A.V.E.N's Imperfection chapter 2 . 5/13/2014
illusionist ninja? Hehe, though it was stated in the summary, I still didn't see that coming! Loving the story so far...
| Kurogane Black Ninja chapter 43 . 5/2/2014
It's been a while since this story has been updated. I was actually truly happy to see it updated because I have missed reading it and the other stories that the two of you write together.
This chapter was interesting in several ways. We have seen a part of Daichi that we don't even or haven't ever seen, which is his sadistic and crazy side. I do wonder if he just did that as an act of desperation or if he truly meant it. That action sort of went against his bible-thumping ways. Other than that, I do't have a problem with this chapter. It was very interesting and showed the dynamics of the love triangle well.
| King Corn chapter 43 . 5/2/2014
One of the best fight scenes of the whole story. Awesome job!
| RadicalRadicals777 chapter 43 . 5/2/2014
Poor Daichi and Araki. They are both having a rough time in life and love.