|Reviews for Torn Family Portrait|
| HFGLF 2 chapter 42 . 2/20
I like the fight between Daichi and Araki. Both of them are fighting so hard, even if it is kind of infantile.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 41 . 2/20
This story is fucking awesome! I want to see Araki and Daichi fight! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 40 . 2/20
So glad this story came back! Please keep updating it! I loved it back when it was super popular and I will be your life long fan!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 39 . 2/20
It sucks that updates are going to be slow on this story for a while but I'm happy that you're still working on it. I loved your new chapter, especially the Vyoun and Kaya moments.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 38 . 2/20
There was a lot of dialouge but I loved the development between Koji and Baki in this chapter. Koji finally has taken an active part in the story. It's good to see that he's showing some of that talent that everyone thought he was so special for having.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 37 . 2/20
I highly enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to a new update soon! Keep up the good work!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 36 . 2/20
There isn't really much to comment on. December was funny, Araki is showing his depth and love for Tsunami, which is very endearing and other teachers are finally becoming concerned with Koji's situation.
I'd be concerned when I saw Kusarigane in the office. Don't they notice him walk in the door XD
| HFGLF 2 chapter 35 . 2/20
This was a laugh out loud chapter that I definitely enjoyed. Koji managed to keep my sense of humor on high and Kaya and December only added to the laughter. This was a great all around chapter.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 34 . 2/20
127 chapters, huh? I think that I can go through that. Besides, I'm currently reading Sacrifice and it's the same chapter estimation as this story so if I can tackle that, then I can surely tackle this with no problem.
Great ending to the play. It was so dramatic, especially Vyoun and Kaya. Koji was just plain funny and I have to laugh at the fact that Kusarigane fell asleep during it. XD. He and Araki are so cute!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 33 . 2/20
I'm so terribly late. My apologies. I just got back from a visit to Canada to see a few relatives of mine but now I'm back and ready to give you a few reviews that I so owe you. They will be short, but hopefully good.
I loved this chapter and the funny situations betwen Koji and Vyoun (not to mention Kaya) were enough to have me rolling on the floor. I definitely hope that the ending of the play is as good as this.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 32 . 2/20
Sorry for the short review but I highly enjoyed this chapter. The play was very funny and Koji in drag had me laughing to no end.
It's nearly 3 here so I'd better hit the hay! Update soon!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 31 . 2/20
This seems like an interesting play- though I think nudity is banned from highschools and is more of a college thing but nonetheless, it's still funny and I'll definitely look forward to seeing Koji in a dress.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 30 . 2/20
I haven't reviewed in a while. I've been in mourning at the loss of a dear friends of mine so I apologize for my lateness and since I have so much to review, my reviews will not be as long as they usually are.
This chapter was a very cute interaction scene between two of my favorite character and I liked the way that you dealt with it and especially the ending. It definitely had me smiling despite my current situation. Great job on this one.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 29 . 2/20
This was a very humorous chapter.
It seems that Araki has sort of a crush on Kusarigane, and after everything they've been through as friends, it's legitamate that he'd feel that way and then feel as if Daichi were the worst thing on earth. It was funny for him to be referred to as 'the dreaded Daichi' by whomever wrote this chapter. I am assuming that the writing is Melissa's, seeing as it looks similar to hers.
This was a good all-around chapter and even if nothing really happened in it, we can see everyone relaxing and having fun. It reminds us all what TFP originally is made of- comedy.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 28 . 2/20
Nice little addition to add in Keiji and company here. I'm assuming that this is BEFORE Sacrifice since Keiji still has the incredibly long ponytail.
I like the interaction with the band, as well as the vivid but not too vivid flashback involving Ayame. I also like the love that you expressed for her, her family and her God.
I guess when you go, no one choses how and we all have a reason, even if it is to inspire someone else.
Great job and beautiful song. You two are a born talent.