Reviews for Not As I Don't Do
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
As for your summary - I've wondered that myself.

And the poem: I loved it. Great rhymes and rhythm.

The ending just seemed to... lose some of the cadence with which the rest of the piece was graced. It also felt a bit odd to me that you ditched your rhyme scheme there, as far as I can tell.

But that's really just minor and it didn't bother me a whole lot. Good work, keep writing.