Oh I love this story, please update soon read all the chapters and cant wait for more

Yay! Anotther great chapeter. But you keep having your cliff hanging moments. It's KILLING ME! I must know what happened to her Please!

Great, great chapter!

Due to my current state of brain-dead-ness, I can't think of anything more intelligent to say, except that I loved this, and I'll be waiting for your next update :)

~Carm~

I loved this whole thing and I'm itching to find out what happens next. Please add more soon! -smiley face-

That was so great, I can't wait for you to update soon. And does Terif really like Tiera, I really need to know!

Yet another great chapter. This just keeps getting better and better with each new chapter. You've got me hooked :)

I can't wait for more!

~Carm~

Lovely job on this. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. The characters seem to be developing even more, as well as the plot. Keep up the great work, and update soon!

~Carm~

Wow that's a great new chapter. So Darin is the bad guy? Well I hope you update soon I need to know.

Wonderful job on this chapter. I like the way you make your characters interact with each other. It's believable and I can just visualize what's happening.

Oh, and I had a dream about your penname. Yes, I know, that's weird! But it was floating on these black clouds and I was looking up at it. I have no idea why.

Update soon!

~carm~

I love this new chapter can't wait for update

Lovely, really lovely chapter. This is such a gripping story that I think I'll die if you don't update soon :)

~carm~

PS

I love your penname :D

This is a truly wonderful story. Your descriptions are fantastic, and let the reader see into the world you've created. I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps the reader interested throughout the entire read. Like I said, truly wonderful. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more :)

~carm~

Wow i love this, the emotions in it are heart wrenching. Your a brilliant writer -well done.

Just got back from my trip to London this evening and yours was the first story I checked for updates when I went online. Was really cheered to see two new chapters :)

Well, generally, I liked it. Really. But I think it might be a good idea to write a bit more about, you know, the inner state of the characters. Like thoughts, feelings. Not that you don't do that, it's just that it feels like you're only sketching those things, not really painting the entire picture and going along the same lines as all the other authors of stories with a similar beginning.

Good luck!

Wow I thought I was a good writer but you well your just amazing. I don't think I can ever come up with something as well as that. I truly hope you write more soon. And I promise to write more too :)