Reviews for Last Breath
TheThingsSheSaid chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
That was sad and sweet, I really loved it. :,)
Dino chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
hiya :D

your storys are nice but this is the first poem of your i've read.

Its lovely, and so sad.

Its one of those poems that make you feel something in your heart and i love it!

thank you

i look forward to reading more :)

poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Very touching and beautifully written. I loved the overall flow of them poem. Keep up the great work. ) -Sara
XxTinkerbell chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Thats so heart breaking, but its wonderful. I really like it, so many people can relate to it. :)
castelgard chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
aw. this is great. and since you are disappointed because of the number of readers and reviewers, i'll read and review your poems! i really liked this poem because first its sad and depressing but then it gets really mushy and romantic which is a great finish.