Reviews for Last Breath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was sad and sweet, I really loved it. :,) |
![]() ![]() hiya :D your storys are nice but this is the first poem of your i've read. Its lovely, and so sad. Its one of those poems that make you feel something in your heart and i love it! thank you i look forward to reading more :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very touching and beautifully written. I loved the overall flow of them poem. Keep up the great work. ) -Sara |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats so heart breaking, but its wonderful. I really like it, so many people can relate to it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. this is great. and since you are disappointed because of the number of readers and reviewers, i'll read and review your poems! i really liked this poem because first its sad and depressing but then it gets really mushy and romantic which is a great finish. kudos. |