Reviews for You wonder
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
konban wa

And you said you weren't so great at non-rhyming poems? I'm sorry, is this what you call "not great" because this is what I call a poem worthy of being added to my favorites. It's really, really outstanding. I love it! I wish I could be as "not great" as you are. ;P

Zaijen

-Shan-
qblisa chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
I love how each method of attack has it's own symbolism attached. Very well crafted. In the end it's the old saying 'you are your worst enemy'. Nice

Lisa

PS: Thanks for the review.
aKa MiLeZ chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
DAMN!DAMN!DAMN!

that means GOOD! GOOD! GOOD!
Cianna Greenwood chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
This is cool - I like the way each of the potential torturers are associated with certain physical attributes. It's well-done, as far as symbolism goes. The last stanza, however, could use a rework. All in all, well done.

Keep writing.