|Reviews for Abroad|
| mitsuki44 chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
Hey there! Awesome first couple of chapters, I am one of those people who fall completely and irrefutably hard for anything to do with Paris...ahh, the romance!
I love Eliot and I know how she probably feels - it's never easy playing second fiddle to others and to feel as though people don't really know YOU. Olivier is a right bastard and Juliette sounds adorable! Audrey seems to be the stereotypical jealous-girlfriend-nemesis-for-the-heroine type of character...
This has a lot of potential...please continue the story? :)
| meduse chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
"Who the hell did he think he was , Gaspard Ulliel?"
haha...i love gaspard ulliel...
anyway, this chapter was hilarious and very well written...
| Jainblu chapter 3 . 6/6/2008
Wow, you must be like super organised... you already have the last five chapter done.
I don't understand how people do it, I'm a procrastinator by nature.
Nominated No. 1 Distracter in my graduating class lool... Really it's that hard to comprehend.
Anyhu, your story has had me thoroughly entertained, I also loike how it's making me brush up on my french skills.
Can't wait to read more, because I really like the way the story's gone so far.
| Jainblu chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
August is my favourite month _
My interest is piqued.
| Aya Moon chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
This story is HILARIOUS!I love that shes into Egyptology and Archeology and that I can see this story going far, keep up the great work!:)
| Twilight Starr chapter 3 . 11/18/2007
That last sentence was hilarious. Great job! This story is an enjoyable read. Please update soon.
| Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 11/18/2007
Poor Eliot-lost luggage and an unwelcoming housemate. It sounds like this story is going to get very interesting. Great job!
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
Good start. Poor Eliot. It wouldn't be any fun having a sister who steals all the attention. ;) Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a brilliant day.
| Dani P chapter 3 . 7/14/2007
great chapter can't wait to read more.
| Dani P chapter 2 . 7/14/2007
good chapters so far I like you're writing style you're very talented. however just a thing about airports in different countries the major cities definatly have english translations on like everything. so you may want to keep that in mind.
| CreativeEdge chapter 3 . 7/10/2007
I like it, alot. theres a really nice subtle flow to this story- one that slowly draws you in rather than dumping the plot on your lab first chapter. I really enjoyed the end of the second chapter, and the beginning of the third, the humor wasn't overly obvious and just ...I dunno added to the charm ?
Very well written, i can't wait until the next chapter.
| sleepiness chapter 3 . 7/10/2007
i really like where this is going!
aha, i just started learning french and am estatic that i can understand the little phrases you put in!
keep it up!
| tornangelwings chapter 3 . 7/10/2007
okay this is the first ive read of it but i absolutly love ita nd i dcantw ait to read more so keep it up.
| Professional scatterbrain chapter 2 . 6/30/2007
Such an exciting begining. I can't wait to read more.
| Pop the Bubble chapter 2 . 6/28/2007
you have some great ideas, but the IM thing was kinda confusing, with the little bits of narration in it - it made it really difficult to read because i had to keep switching back and forth
anyways, keep it up!