Reviews for Shades of Fire |
---|
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story. I wouldn't mind reading more about Drystan and Heidi. We still have college! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woow! :O This. Is. Amazing. haha I would ask for you to update soon but you haven't updated in about 2 years *VERY sad face* haha well, amazing job and I seriously wish that you would write more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I love the whole writing thing that you've incorporated into this fic. The characters are great and you're writing flows really well. You're first chapter was so well written I couldn't help but want more. But anyway, they're finally together! I'm so happy. Half of me wants you to just end the story here, and the other half wants to keep reading. So yeah, I'm half looking forward to the next chapter :) -Innocence |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS WAS JUST JGREKWVTBERNFIDNRIS FREAKIN AMAZING AND I DOIED AND I COULDNT STOP THINKING 'SEXUAL FRUSTRATION!' AND YOURE AN AMAZING WRITER AND I THINK IM IN LOVE WITH DRYSTAN AND OHMYGOD THIS WAS ADORABLE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this story so much. The chemistry between Drystan and Heidi is great. Thanks for making a wonderful story. PS I hope you haven't given up on finishing this story. I'll be waiting for another update, :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D i love! seriously. update those 4 chapters soon please. i am so glad those two are finally together. it made me smile :) but wasnt the last time she was in his apartment when he was sick? it wasnt during the rainstorm. keep up the good writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My Goodness! This is SUCH an amazing story! Keep up the great work and please update soon! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! -Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it was most definitely enjoyable! Actually, I don't think that's the word! It was really GREAT! I love how you made the situation so realistic. I would probably act the same way were I in their shoes. XDD Thanks! Can't wait for more~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, with all the paint and kissing, I couldn't help but grin for most of the chapter. Something about the sequence of events was romantic. I also love how Heidi rambles so much (not because I do so as well... cough). Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading all the chapters of this amazing story. and i have three words - fab u lus! hehe! No, i've really enjoyed reading up to here, it really had me sucked in, and i cannot wait to read more, so please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. It has a nice undertone of humor in it. The consept is really good too; orginal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to think I'm good (At kissing xD TMI, too, I know). And you're so not immature! Spelling at sex doesn't make you not mature ._. Anyway! FINALLY, they kiss! I'm so happy, I could burst! Yay, they were so cute together! Total perfect couple ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! I really like this story and I'm glad you let their relationship build (Heidi and Drystan) My favorite part was when Heidi was checking out Drystan's ass and blurted 'Ass'. So Funny! Well, UPDATE SOON! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter! They're finally together...I can't wait to see what you have in store for the new couple in the next few chapters! Heidi was adorable, with all her rambling and nervousness. And Drystan, he's ALWAYS adorable and cute...I want a Drystan of my own! Can't wait till the next update! Oh, and congrats on turning eighteen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy reading this story, especially this chapter! It was just so cute! XD I love Drystan and Heidi, they are just too adorable! I hope you update soon :D ThePerfectMismatch |