Aww that was so sweet when he asked her to stay beside him. I think it's great that he was willing to let her take care of him, but kind of sad that she's really the only one he has. I can't wait for them to get together, though I know it'll take time. This chapter was perfect the way it was, length and all.

Ah, yes. French fries. . .Hm. I think I'll be heading my way to Wendy's after I finish this review. Hehe. (But don't think of me as a fat cow :D) Anyways, I'm really sad summer is over too. But there's a four-day weekend coming up, and I'm not even Jewish!

I think this chapter was okay. I like how Heidi tries to help Drystan with his sickness despite the fact that they hate each other. . .or do they?

It's so weird how this story progresses. It seems like only yesterday Heidi was in that weird writing school, and she was studying Drystan - and now she's in his apartment, saying sweet nothings to him. HEHE.

Can't wait 'till your one month hiatus is over and October 7th comes along with a brand new chapter. I've been reading your blogs and saw that you like John Steinbeck. Me too! I love "Of Mice and Men" and "The Pearl". I think those are his best.

Until next time!

A.H.

(Please r&r my story, "Dreams,Dreams". I don't know what to do with it!)

It wasn't rushed... I found it strange that Lance didn't try anything with Heidi, even if it was just a mere greeting in the hallway. The ending was nice... and I was going to mention something about that last line she said, but then you mentioned it in the AN so I was like, ok... I like the line though... and I might steal it and use it in one of my fanfics. Teehee.

aww. a fry.

(moment of silence)

haha. A fry. pretty cool. haha.

great chapter...I cant help but find this story very addicting I love it, I cant wait for another update...Drystan's so the best!they need to tell each other ( I like you)..

ugh sure i read this story right when you go on hiatus for a month :-(. oh well, it's quite good; update soon!

UGH! Darnit...Heidi & Drystan need to get a move on. They were so close.

Other than that, very very good chapter. It kept me in suspense. :-)

I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

someone is jealous, i think.

Can't say this chapter was one of my favorites. It kinda dragged on. Just a little though.

Other than that, Valentine's Day better get here soon! )

Aw! It's hot that Dryst believes in soul mates (kinda). I'm scared for Linda and Hayden... KIM AND MIKE finally got together! *CHEER* Can't wait for your Valentine's Day chapter, but we all know that Heidi is going to end up with Dryst, no matter how much Lance tries to convince us otherwise.

UPDATE SOON!

is he trying to tell her that he likes her

Haha, they sure are getting close. I have to admit, at first I thought you'd make Drystan one of those semi egotistic and jerk-like characters, but I'm glad you didn't. Very cute (personality wise of course).

Can't wait for the Valentine's Day debut.

why, of course.

Who wouldn't be thinking that! :D

Great chapter...I'm so happy for Kim and Mike...I like Drystan..I hope Drystan and Heidi get together soon..cant wait to read more!

The soulmate talk was nice and kind of how I feel about it too. And I'm so happy Kim and Mike finally got together. Now, all that is left is Heidi and Drystan and then the world will be perfect. Lol.