| Reviews for Shades of Fire |
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  Angela Hilario chapter 5 . 8/17/2007 LOVE this chapter. I don't know what is it with me, but I like to read about couples who bicker a lot like Drystan and Heidi does, because it makes them more compatible, don't they? And Heidi seems to have a secret crush on him, but his past isn't so swell, is it? Please update soon, and also update the "Commencement'' one too, which is also based on Drystan, am I correct? - Angela |
 Angela Loves chapter 4 . 8/17/2007 Liked how you based his character on another story of yours. Keep posting! |
| ithinkineedaattitudeadjustment chapter 9 . 8/16/2007 I love it...really...cant wait for the update! |
| xtotallyatpeacex chapter 9 . 8/14/2007 I really like the way their relationship is coming along. A lot of stories jump from 'I hate you' to 'I love you' and you just think, "What the hell? Didn't he just push her off a cliff? Why is she kissing him?" But yeah, I like the wy yours is paced. Good job so far. :D |
| Twinkle Star Bell chapter 9 . 8/13/2007 You know I don't have any problem hating my dad but I guess that's just me. I didn't even remember what month we were in in the last chapter. lol. So it totally went over my head. I liked the jump and I was like omg they're gonna kiss and then...no. Oh well other than that it was quite a cute chapter. I really liked it. I think it all made sense and it flowed quite nicely. Nothing to complain about. Update soon. |
| PaintSunshine chapter 9 . 8/12/2007 *squee* gosh, this makes me feel so giddy. :D |
| pleasebequiet chapter 9 . 8/11/2007 I really like your story! update soon! _ |
| Essevera chapter 9 . 8/11/2007 nice story :) |
| violet-eyez chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 so cute |
| DakotaRites chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 Oh wow. I love this series. I love Heidi and her sarcasm, I love Drystan because... well, he's Drystan. I could go on, but this is amazing so far. I couldn't stop reading. There were a few grammatical errors, but when aren't there? Keep it up. |
| Menadoa chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 Hayden is adorable. :-) I actually can't find anything to critize about this chapter, well except at the end where she was saying she wanted to hold his hand. it says, give hold his hand. that's all! christmas that isn't jolly? suspenseful. :-) |
| anon chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 I thought it was pretty consistent. Can't wait for your next update! |
| the.social.pariah chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 I rather liked this chapter, i like the friendly interactions between the two, can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up! |
| Tigerlillium chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 So cute! and they kissed...well, on the cheek, but hey, it's a start. Update Soon! |
| ihrtbks chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 If I kidnapped Hayden, would Linda press charges? LOL. I liked this chapter; it's nice you move fast though; in one of my stories, I managed to spend like six chapters on the same day. As for CC, you could slip in short descriptive phrases for forgetfuls like me. For instance, instead of "He looked up at me", "His bright green eyes met my brown ones." UPDATE SOON! |