Pretty good. The characters seem to be more lively and realistic in this chapter. I think the plot needs some kinks worked out. Just in the way it flows and connects. Also, Drystan and Heidi I think need to be a little more realistic and have their characters show more around each other. I felt the last chapter was a little weak in that area. It's a very good story though and can't wait for the next update!

I like Dryst in this chapter. He seems more his age, like you said. But Mike...is he just being the overprotective best friend, or is there something to worry about?

UPDATE SOON!

I love your story! And I really like Drystan (and his name), and Hayden sounds cute _

So please update soon and keep up the good work :)

I think this is the first time I have ever thought of a story as SWEET. Weird, I know, but it keeps bringing that smile to my face that people usually get when they think something sweet and cute. Keep up the good work.

Hmmph. Lance reeks trouble.

Hayden reminds me of this little girl I babysat for a total of about 15 hours over a two day span and I do you know how much I got from it? 10 FREAKIN DOLLARS! She was so cute and sweet but hard to keep up with. At the end, I had back pain like an old person from chasing her around.

HAHA! I love it! UPDATE!

this story is really cute, i really like it!

keep it up!

lol..funny...can't wait till the next chapter

OMG I missed quite a few chapters while I was on vacation. Quite enjoyable. The characters are really coming to life and becoming very real. I loved it and can't wait how things will turn out with those two.

Physical...you're starting to sound like Linda, or maybe it's supposed to be the other way around, Linda sounds like you. I like Drystan when he's being nice, not just civil. I like Hayden too, he's ADORABLE! I love love love Drystan and Heidi's chemistry, especially their bickering. You argue with those you love; you slash and shoot at those you hate.

UPDATE SOON!

Hey! Another great chapter. I love the sexual tension between Heidi and Drystan! It was masterfully written. I also loved the little reference to Valerie writing love poems about Tom Welling. I seriously cracked up when I read that. He is wicked hot, though. Anyway, update soon!

Haha, this story is just getting better and better. I like Drystan's character, despite his ego.

I didn't find anything wrong with the chapter, it was great like usual. The only thing I'd comment on is the lack of detail on Hayden and his mom. Keep Writing!

~Dreamless~

WOOT, look who updated after all this time...OK, maybe it wasn't that long-but it felt like it was. Right, so, anywho it was a very good chapter. Amazing. Well, planned, interesting plot and just about everything was great. Some parts seemed a little forced. Over all I really liked it. I like the style you use. It really fits the story and the beggining was really well done. Well, I shall shut up now and say bye. Bye.

i got so excited when i saw there was a new chapter from that author alert thing that i logged off of gchat immediately without saying bye [hahaha i think it's habit] and read/perused/devoured/whatever verbs the chapter.

se? your story is a phenomenon. this chapter didn't seem to flow as well as the others but i think it was just the awkward pauses in the conversation between drystan and hidey. heidi.

and then i got excited at the chemistry part

and now i'm waiting for that next chapter b/c i know you have at least 9 written!