I like the origionality of the name. Pretty too.

~Dreamless_Infinity~

She with her chocolate like I am with my mint ice cream. lol. But I do always love the occasional whip cream, chocolate sauce, and sprinkles. lol. Can't wait for the next update. This story is so real life and awesome and your main characters definitely have very interesting names. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love the meeting. I think any normal person would react the way the guy did. I mean a person "stalking" you! YIKES! lol. Well update soon this story is very different.

I could here I could hear

Anyway, it's getting good. ;) Good chapter title and I hope this nameless guy gets a name soon!

Near the ending you repeated "my life" twice. It's a little dull so far, but I'm assuming it's getting better. And you have spaces after your quotes, which annoys me for some reason...

-AAC

Kim and Mike! They flirt too much to not end up together in a fictional story. The muse could probably use a name, but no hurry. I really liked that part, especially where he got her notebook back from those jerks.

UPDATE SOON!

nicely done _ you're good with words

I loved the conclusion to this chapter. It makes things interesting. xD.

It's pretty hard to come up with an original plot these days, but your story has a pretty original, interesting, and funny plot.

I love the story, and the situation the main character's in is pretty funny. ;)

So much drama... the introduction of the guy was good, it flowed with the story except for her being alone somehow. I thought she was on the sidewalk surounded by people she was trying to walk away from. Oh well, anyway, I hope you find time to update!

~Dreamless_Infinity~

The muse love it. He's like some mystical magical creature! Well another wonderfully written chapter. Gosh I hate preps. I love the chase down! I would totally stalk a guy like that. lol. I hope that doesn't give you a creepy vibe or anything. Anyway, wonderful love how the plot is moving along.

Well, if I do say so myself, this story is excruciatingly well written. I'd like to read more soon! :)

Bubble boy! Hehe, sorry, it just reminded me of a rather humorous episode of Seinfeld...um, yeah.

Wow, pictures of dead rats in a locker as the result of competition. Damn, and I thought my school was intense. I go to a pretty well-known private school, and things are always competitive, but definitely never to that extent. That's just nuts! I love Valerie, though. She's the sort of breath of fresh air that really livens a place like that up. Update soon!

I like this it is good. Update soon please!

this is really good! i love the concept!

Hey! This is really great so far. It's a very original concept, and I like that it focuses on a topic that everyone on this website can relate to: writing. Fantastic beginning! Update soon!