Really really like it. You have such a unique writing style. I really love this story it's brilliant!

This story is so good! You could really write and detail appearances. I wish I could write as well as you. I can't wait for the next chapter! And btw, I'm reading "The Bell Jar" right now!

Did you write those poems? I liked them. Although its somewhat boring, most first chapters are. I like the storyline, although the ending I thought should be more drawn out. Also, you never say what color his hair is, I just found that odd with the reference to him brushing hair out of his eyes. Anyway, hope you keep writing! Update!

~Dreamless_Infinity~

this is a very lovely first chapter. i'm really excited to see what else is in store for this story.