| Reviews for Shades of Fire |
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   Sneha903 chapter 18 . 7/10/2009 tht was an awesome chap! wow the story will be done soon! |
| Star Whistler chapter 18 . 7/10/2009 Aw...I loved this chapter ] They finally kissed! Heidi was so funny awkward in this chapter with all her rambling, but I'm glad you kept her in character... Can't wait till the next chapter. I wanna know what kind of 'drama' you have in store for the lovebirds! Update soon. Oh, and congrats on being eighteen and graduating] ~ |
| violet-eyez chapter 18 . 7/10/2009 lol...they are too cute together |
| deltaphi chapter 18 . 7/10/2009 YAY! They kissed! :) |
| Liz chapter 18 . 7/9/2009 LOL FINALLY. once again, she sounds so much like you, especially when she goes in one of those rambling/angry fits lmao. |
| silvershadow1379 chapter 18 . 7/9/2009 great chapter, I loved everything between them, can't wait for the next chapter |
| MellyMeliza chapter 18 . 7/9/2009 THAT WAS BY FAR MY MOST FAVORITE CHAPTER! :D Ah! Enjoyed it? Very much! Entertaining? Heck Yes! Funny? Of Course! Enjoyable? Very. Awkward? In a cute way! :D Weird? Hellono! |
| Casfar chapter 18 . 7/9/2009 Aw, finally Drystan and Heidi have somethign going on... All the drama is practically sorted and I'm glad they made it through. I don't know what else to say, my mind is drawing huge blanks today. But I've really enjoyed reading this story. Heidi got an offer to write for her teacher's magazine and I think that's just wonderful. If only people could have connects just like that for their own talent. |
| P.F Ally chapter 18 . 7/9/2009 Aw I've been waiting for this like...forever! XD nice chapter :) Btw, I love Drystan~ :3 |
| MellyMeliza chapter 17 . 7/9/2009 :D Update super soon please! I was always tempted to read this story when I saw them on the communities, but I never did because it hadnt been updated for like a year. But when I saw you updated, I read all 17 chapters from 10:45pm to 5am. Super good, and I totally cant wait for the upcoming chapters! :D |
| Emoting-again chapter 17 . 6/23/2009 Love this story. I just went back and read a bunch of it over to refresh my memory, and I liked it just as much. I get the feeling that a lot of the stuff in this might be inspired from personal experiences or things you've heard/seen? Maybe it's just me looking into it, haha. But I know that I'm inspired from my own life experiences and craziness and your style of writing gives me that same feeling. Anyhow, great chapter, hope to see more frequent updates. Yay for summers before college I'm in the same place. You majoring in english/journalism/creative writing? But yay, keep up the good work. Quick constructive criticism: You tend to use "she/he/I shrieked/screeched/screamed" a lot with your dialogue. "Said" works just as well and doesn't stand out as much as repetitive. Just a little thing that popped out at me. |
| Star Whistler chapter 17 . 6/14/2009 No! They didn't kiss *insert sad face here*. But at least this means that Drystan & Heidi's feelings are (somewhat) in the open now - because you don't lean in to kiss someone you have absolutely no romantic feelings towards, right? Can't wait till the next chapter - I want to see how these two deal with their almost-kissing. AND how much trouble they get in ;P ~ |
| benozir chapter 17 . 6/9/2009 EK! loved it the story was awesome!1 |
| deltaphi chapter 17 . 6/9/2009 LOVE this story and chapter! please continue, i can't wait for the next update! |
| Ethereal Discordance chapter 17 . 6/2/2009 I really like this story! It sucks that they didn't get to kiss yet and although I love Drystan, I feel kinda bad for Lance too. Poor guy really liked her. Still, great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! |