Wow, good chapter. Love lives suck, noone can ever really tell you whats the right thing to do. XD Can't wait for the next chapter!

If you're writing a new story, find a Beta. Also, the chapter was good. However if you're updating after, ahem, long gaps, then you should put a recap at the beginning of the following updates.

Let's go for an update soon, yeah?

OMG. You are so lucky that I won't throw rocks at you! If you wish to live a long life, I would suggest updating real soon.

Haha. I sound creepy!

That was a really great chapter, however i think there should of been a little more connections to the previous chapter. I liked that this chapter finally made heidi realise some stuff and put her relationships into perspective. update soon, this is a really well written story.

YaY thanks for the extra long chapter and i hope u give us more dryston goodness soon D

'I could his hearing increasing, but all I could really single out were these cutting words, sharp but jagged.' i really couldnt figure out the first part of this sentence though i could guess at it...

and from the next paragraph 'I should have just let you failed' It's 'fail'

so i managed to catch these more obvious error, didnt scan through the whole thing P

I love drystan! aww hes gong to feel so bad now :(.. update soon!

are we going to find out what happened between lance and drystan?

Yeah, it took me a second to remember what this story was about. Byt he way AP exams are in MAY, Sats the latest are in June! It's the middle of July lady! ANyways, the chapter was very cute, in a n angsty type of way... drifting eyes were funny.

Just...wow.

It was a very good chapter. But I feel sad for Heidi & Drystan. I couldn't believe some of the things that came out of Drystan's mouth, but I suppose he was just upset and jealous.

I CANNOT believe that Valerie knew Drystan from the beginning. I was excited that she was pushing Heidi to ask Drystan out...too bad Lance got to her first!

Oh well, can't wait till the next chapter! Please don't make me wait another few months!

finally...so how is he going to make it up to her?

I agree, personally, Heidi and her "wandering eyes" was the funniest part in the chapter, especially her coverup. lol, "I did want some water". hahaha.

Otherwise, good chapter and please, finish this story. As you said, there isn't much to go, and it is summer. XD

- Terra

Yay! You've finally updated! *does a happy dance* I've missed this lovely little love triangle so much! I'm glad that Heidi's finally worked out that she actually does like Drystan more than Lance...even if the timing was so bitterly ironic.

Ah, the SATs, APs, and all that lovely jazz. What a party. Did you just finish your junior year? Or are you going to be a freshman in college next fall?

Anyway, update soon! I'm glad you're back!

hi!

din get a chance 2 review b4 so im doin it now.

ur story's relli gud! im really eager to find out hw dis all turns out! so wats wid da sudden hiatus?

Could u pls update? pretty please with a cherry on top? ( if ur a chocolate gurl..ill add sum sprinkles too :P)

What can I say? This story is absolutely AMAZING! All your characters have depth, which is something that a lot of characters in other stories lack. Heidi's awesome - someone I think I could be friends with had she existed XD. Also, how COOL is Drystan? Not only is his name fantabulous, but I have a feeling he's pretty darn hot. Lucky Heidi :P

Anyway, great job, and update soon :D

Sarah :) x

heyy, I just wanted to let you know I'm reading this. I like it so far, great job :D! -off to read chapter 2-

PS - I'm your 200th reviewer! HAHAHA! :D

Sarah :) x