so far... I like this story :)

YAY! I love it! Drystan is awesome and so is Heidi! Haydens dad is a fucking asshole!(

Heidi, Heidi...where has she gotten herself into. She really should watch what she says!. She does NOT like Lance!

Drystan, please, stand up for what you want(Heidi)! He should convince Heidi that HE is the BEST!

(I mean, Heidi already likes him. All he has to do is show her his feelings and KICK LANCES ASS! LOL)

I can't wait for the next chapter and I know you're busy and all but please don't abondon this story! Please, UPDATE AGAIN AND ASAP!

Wow i lke this story... it has an original concept, and very thoughtful. I can tell you're a writer...but then, you ARE a writer (writing this story)..but a serious one yeah. I love how she fell for Dray but she's kinda confused... pushing a guy away after she realises she likes him..tsk

Wow i just started reading this story and i have to say that its intersting. Please update soon

I think Drayden is hurt about Heidi thinking about Lance. Thank you for updating. (I'm not ready to kill you...)

Oh please! Update soon! I am positively in love with your story. Your way of writing is excellent; your story ideas mesmerizing. Dramatic and angsty... I like those kind of chapters... haha.

Rebekah

so is she going to choose?

Well I think that was an awesome updated. I really wish they would get to the confessing really quick and I just wish Lance wasn't there! He needs to be gone! GONE! What kind of a name is Lance anyway? Anyway I really wish they would kiss or make out this sexual tension is so geting on my nerves. If you updated around Christmas I think that would be an awesome Christmas gift.

Yay! You updated FINALLY *does happy dance*

Please don't make me wait this long again...I don't think I'll survive ; )

Drystan's a cutie

hayden is such a cute name. and I feel bad for the little boy. He's soo cute! “It doesn’t hurt as much compared to a lot of other things” I've also wondered what he meant by that... hm... anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story, its obvious Drystan likes her, but does she have to be so damn indecisive, reminds me of me a little. How long is this story going to be? Some action, some climax! Which sounds like the next chapter!

loved it, loved it. god, I'm obsessed with this story. kills me that i have to wait so long, but i totally udnerstand the school thing. readers of my own stuff got angry with me too, lol. oh well. anyhow, awesome job, keep up the good work. :)

Me! Me! I'm ready to kill you! I've got an AK-47 right here in my hands. Naww, just kidding. But I am pretty mad that it has been a while since you've updated. And it's driving me crazy how the things are between Heidi and Drystan.

I think I've found my new favorite story. Really, I love it so far. Heidi just frustrates me because of her confused feelings. Lance is lame and Drystan is so amazing. Why can't she see that? Please update soon!

That seemed pretty short. It shouldn't be that hard to push another update before Christmas, yeah?

And there was a typo: "[...] Drystan was asleep."