Reviews for Emily
TeaWithOnions chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Aw, so cute. Nice imagery.
Andy Anderson chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Wow. This is really beautiful. I love the imagery in this, I can really see everything in this story.
stfnia chapter 1 . 6/25/2007

Okay, first off... this poem was beautiful. Probably it isn't the best poem I've ever read in my life, the best written or thought or whatever, but this is the portray of what I feel and it has hit me hard, it has hit my chest madly. So that makes it the most beautiful poem I've ever read in my whole life.

Second... Some of the things you wrote, some parts of it are the exact feelings I'm going through.

"I realize that she doesn’t know she’s beautiful.

She doesn’t see herself the way I do.

She has never seen herself as a goddess;

she’s never heard bells when she’s laughed.

I do.

I can only hope that one day,

maybe years from now, she’ll catch a brief glimpse of the beauty that she exudes

every moment of her existence,

and maybe then she can love herself a fraction of the amount that I love her"

That's what I'm feeling right now, towards a girl I'm so in love with. :(

Damn, this is going straight to my favourites and so are you.

This is just what I needed to read today. Fate happens.