Reviews for dimethyl ketone
Escapist chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
haha, perhaps. You make the mood extremely clear, comparing cheap vodka to a suicide attempt. You really write a scene nicely, transitioning from the emergency room to the current hotel location with a simple comparison. The last few lines are perfect, mainly because we've all had those nights, and I can understand exactly what you're describing. Thank you for the review, as well. :)
chemarim chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
I really like this poem (and I rarely like people's poetry, lol), and would love to see it finished if you were so inclined. The only thing I think you could change would be the line after acetone that states you're talking about nail polish remover. Most people think of nail polish remover when you say acetone anyways, so it's probably not necessary.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
i really really like it.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Well, it really doesn't seem to end. So maybe you should. I liked it for the most part, except the ending. There just seems to be something missing. Good job nonetheless.