Hey, I really liked your story, really unique and a great story line. Where'd you get the idea for it? 'Cause it seems far fetched, but in a good way...anyway, I'm rambling. Good job.

Intriguing and well done, but I feel so sorry for the husband Mark, fell in love with someone who wasn't really there. Interesting idea, and it ended with what's best for everyone. She with Adrian, and Mark can begin again.

That was wonderful! Really Unique! Amazing job!

a nice one