ooh! I don't think it was horrible! a little short but not horrible! keep writing!

I like this story a lot!

I was under a different PenName before: Pamina Rose INC? and I reviewed for your other story, Why Likeing Your Best Friend Is NOT a Good Idea, for every chapter. So, obviously, I love your work.

I have to wait a while to post my stories, but I hope you'll read them!

Okay, so, yeah.

Great chapter! Onto the next one!

Okay, first, this story is fantabulous! I adore it!

And second, please update soon!

I'm still laughing at Carlie walking in on Brayden. And when you said "relieving himself," i'll admit i thought you meant something else.

SO i thought it was a bit hypocritical of him calling her a pervert. Then i remembered your summary. So s'all good.

haha.

"i USED to like you, carlie."

-ATTACK-

hahahhaahaha.

added to alerts, nonetheless.

c'mon, continue this! it's awesome. possum.

i like the narration. and the whole walk-in-on-hott-guy-in-bathroom was really funny. but freaky. deaky.

oh dear lord, please ignore the rhyming, i tend to do that alot.

OMG! Finally a story that makes my life seem heaven! Thats why you be nice to everyone, and ask out the people you like becuase of them, not thier looks. Which is why I kind of wish people would listen to that, I'd end up with all of the guys, not a little desperate 14 year old mother of two. Ah, life sucks. I sure hope it will be a boy and a girl. I'd HATE having the same-sex twins!

OMG! Continue! Wow! So good! Update ASAP! :)