This is a really well written story. Good plot, developed characters, good grammar... etc. Bad grammar is SUCH a turn-off. Please continue! :)

P.S., could you please review my story? Thanks!

I love this story. Please continue it!

This story seems pretty interesting!

Logan is a huge player!

Even though you just introduced Dean, I have a feeling I am going to like him ( I don't know why though, maybe its the name)

lol

Update soon!

:D

*~LaVi~*

Man, I'd love to write as good as youu! I love this story. : )

Awh, I love this! : ) I love their witty-banter.

I really like this. I really love your style of writing. Its fantastic.

great chapter...I like it very much...I cant wait to see what happens next... hope you update soon

So much drama, so much potential... I'm definately intrigued... Please write more when you can and great work so far :)

great chapter, the story is progressing well,

i really like your narrative technique, its not all done in first person, so it gives distance to the story, allowing the reader to make their own minds up almost, great!

Hey..

I liked the start of this.

I liked that you started after the heartbreak. I'm guessing you'll be adding in flashbacks every now and then... or will the entire thing be told in flashback from here on in?

Hehe, sorry too early to be asking that huh?

Well I like te subtle detail of emotion through little descriptions of action you gave, like when Audrey was cold and Logan instinctively grabbed his jacket sleeve (as if to take it off and offer it?) nice touch.

Well I better get going, hope you update soon.

I lov ethis.

man, i can tell this is going to be a very sweet/very sad story. looking forward to it!

~k

interesting story, i like the premises of it, im interested to see where it goes

sounds great and interesting...i like it... i cant wait to see what happens next.. hope you update soon

A promising love story. Great start, I sure hope it remains that way till the end.