|Reviews for Won't You Tell Me?|
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
Aw, that was really a touching poem! The message came through so well, and your rhyming made it even more clear. I liked your setup of putting it into different verses with that line between every strophe.
Keep at it! You should consider that rhyming, it's really great!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| InViSiBlE wOmAn chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
I like this paticular stanza:
Sometimes I look at the sky when I walk
Instead of the ground
Look at the stars through the car window
And smile when no one is around.
It has kind of a nice warm happy feeling to it and I like it. Very well written good job!