Reviews for Won't You Tell Me?
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
Aw, that was really a touching poem! The message came through so well, and your rhyming made it even more clear. I liked your setup of putting it into different verses with that line between every strophe.

Keep at it! You should consider that rhyming, it's really great!

The Reverse Edge Blade
InViSiBlE wOmAn chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
I like this paticular stanza:

Sometimes I look at the sky when I walk

Instead of the ground

Look at the stars through the car window

And smile when no one is around.

It has kind of a nice warm happy feeling to it and I like it. Very well written good job!